Thanks for the feedback 
I’ve been updating the proposal based on other folks’ feedback and I will start updating this forum post now.
Hopefully this will make the technical approach clearer.
As I’ve drilled down into what the project can offer to various stakeholders, it’s become clear that the use cases I included in the original version of this forum post are the just tip of the iceberg.
The closest I’ve come to a common theme among them is that governance failures cost everyone involved in OpenGov - in misallocated treasury capital, but also our time, headaches and often a toxic environment.
I’ve also realised that I need to make the use cases outside OpenGov clearer - so there will be more focus in the updated proposal on ‘user behaviour’ - so that this can not just include efficient and effective governance, but also any onchain behaviours that anyone - eg product teams, or just Polkadot nerds - want to measure or know how to incentivise.
The proposal is complete rn, but I will continue to work on it a little, to include where it fits in from the ‘citizenship’ perspective.
Thanks for the feedback.
Rest of OpenGov, I’d love to hear y’all’s thoughts too!
(please comment on the NEW forum post not here, tho!)